Hooooo boy
Jul. 8th, 2012 06:39 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
rainwatersparkJust drafted the outline for the third draft of EK I, and...man, a lot of rewriting needs to be done. Again.
I think I'm happy with this plot outline (though maybe I say that after every new outline)--I wrote it after a flash of inspiration about the antagonist's methodology. And, to be fair, it's not *that* much different from what I have now, after the second draft--it's just a lot more fleshed out. But while the superficial action seems good enough, I'm still not sure that in this outline I hammer home the protagonist's internal character development yet.
Sigh. I'm going to try to take a break from my computer now.
I think I'm happy with this plot outline (though maybe I say that after every new outline)--I wrote it after a flash of inspiration about the antagonist's methodology. And, to be fair, it's not *that* much different from what I have now, after the second draft--it's just a lot more fleshed out. But while the superficial action seems good enough, I'm still not sure that in this outline I hammer home the protagonist's internal character development yet.
Sigh. I'm going to try to take a break from my computer now.
